Way to go on getting it finished! It's looking good. I might make him look a little more like he is trying to hide and believing that he has succeeded. Making his smile more like he's playing a really good trick. You could also bring his shoulders up higher to make it look like he's really trying. Also, I would kern the spaces between the "n't" and the "e-n-s". Both of those spaces seem a little to wide. And be careful on the right side of lining the branches up a little too tightly with the trees. You might consider using the same font that was used for the beginner reading books about Dick and Jane. http://37days.typepad.com/37days/images/dick_and_jane.jpg Anyway, thanks for keeping things going here.
Way to go on getting it finished!
ReplyDeleteIt's looking good. I might make him look a little more like he is trying to hide and believing that he has succeeded. Making his smile more like he's playing a really good trick. You could also bring his shoulders up higher to make it look like he's really trying. Also, I would kern the spaces between the "n't" and the "e-n-s". Both of those spaces seem a little to wide. And be careful on the right side of lining the branches up a little too tightly with the trees. You might consider using the same font that was used for the beginner reading books about Dick and Jane. http://37days.typepad.com/37days/images/dick_and_jane.jpg
Anyway, thanks for keeping things going here.
Thanks for the critique. I may try this in cut paper, so I may do those changes then. :)
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